"Some people come in our life as blessing, others come in our life as lessons" I will not forget this wisdom from my father when I was a teenager. Actually, I did not understand it very well until I studied in university and practiced an independent life. Indeed, there are a lot of people came to my life as blessing, but there is just one I want to meet and have dinner with someday which is my high school teacher.
I want to meet him in yard restaurant nearby our high school to memorize the place where he established students dreams to be active people in their society after his seminars about a positive person characteristics; I effected strongly by those lectures. In addition, I am dying to talk with them about the answer of question that he asked us when we were in class about does the life change the person principles when he/she grew up? Moreover, I hope he remembers me to tell him about one story of succeed that he was the reason to it to take place by encouraging me to do it. Also, I want to make him proud of my job in university.
In conclusion, there are a few people influence the person and he like to meet them again but by that time the chance is gone. Because of that, try to enjoy people around you.
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ReplyDeleteHi abdulrahman,
ReplyDeleteI really like your hook, which is your father's wisdom. Also, I hope you can meet your teacher one day. I also like your thought in the conclusion. However, I recommend you to replace "which" by "who" in last sentence in your introduction, which is "one I want to meet and have dinner with someday which is my high school teacher" because you describe a person.
Good luck my brother.
Hello Abdul,
ReplyDeleteIt's cool to remember your high school teacher that is closer than other teachers in any university.
You have nice thought.
Good luck :D
hi abdul.. good job i like your father wisdom and i hope you can meet your teacher and have dinner with him. However, I think you have grammar mistakes, so make sure to review your grammar after finish.
ReplyDeletethank you.. ANAS
Hi, i like your hook. i hope you can meet your teacher soon.
ReplyDeletegood job
Very nice to know that a teacher influenced you so much. I'm sure he would be very proud of your academic success so far and how you are still pushing yourself towards your goals. "Does life change a person's principles as they grow up?" I think so. If nothing changes, are you really growing?
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